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after the bomb #1

September 12, 2011

Symertoerton
LOS ANGELEyajima
abilityists

PUBLISHERS NEW YORK
A FIGHT WITH TWO WILDCATS
No, he was all right!

Harry’s son nodded.
Three columns and two arches.
GLORY MAY NOT LAST.

 

 

(cut-up by both spoke-words and Weltanschauung using shuffled yahoo search results and 1GB of project gutenberg text)

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  1. September 14, 2011 12:00 am

    Interesting levels of intelligibility. I like the mid-line portmanteaux in the first stanza, especially the first line; very open to meanings. The second stanza moves to per-word coherence, but the lines as a whole are still very open to interpretation. The last stanza is solid, the final line is almost a challenge.

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